Thanks for the suggestion! It's something I'm considering for future updates, but right now I'm focused on improving the story, characters, and overall quality of the game.
I don't want to be too critical to an early release like this, but there definitely needs to be a bit more material in the writing. Right now it's basically just the characters saying what they're doing and that they're happy about X/Y, and there's almost no pacing at all.
IMO the biggest offender was the lewd scenes. I'm sorry but a CG alone is not able to carry those. It needs a bare minimum of prose and dialogue. The romance/sex itself also had no real lead in. Lina and the player really needed some more interactions before I could believe anyway.
It's also strange that the dialogue head sprite reactions appears early on and then disappears suddenly. Was there a reason you chose to do that?
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to play the game and write such a thoughtful comment.
This is my first experience creating a visual novel, so I'm still learning and improving as I go. The game is also still in active development, and I plan to expand the writing, character interactions, pacing, and overall story in future updates.
Your points about the dialogue, the romance, and the CG scenes are very helpful, and I'll definitely keep them in mind while working on the next versions.
Thanks again for your support and for highlighting these areas for improvement!
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will there be futa options ?
Thanks for the suggestion! It's something I'm considering for future updates, but right now I'm focused on improving the story, characters, and overall quality of the game.
I don't want to be too critical to an early release like this, but there definitely needs to be a bit more material in the writing. Right now it's basically just the characters saying what they're doing and that they're happy about X/Y, and there's almost no pacing at all.
IMO the biggest offender was the lewd scenes. I'm sorry but a CG alone is not able to carry those. It needs a bare minimum of prose and dialogue. The romance/sex itself also had no real lead in. Lina and the player really needed some more interactions before I could believe anyway.
It's also strange that the dialogue head sprite reactions appears early on and then disappears suddenly. Was there a reason you chose to do that?
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to play the game and write such a thoughtful comment.
This is my first experience creating a visual novel, so I'm still learning and improving as I go. The game is also still in active development, and I plan to expand the writing, character interactions, pacing, and overall story in future updates.
Your points about the dialogue, the romance, and the CG scenes are very helpful, and I'll definitely keep them in mind while working on the next versions.
Thanks again for your support and for highlighting these areas for improvement!
Its because this is AI Slop. These responses seem AI too, tbh
I don't think so 😐